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话题解读
《英语课程标准》中关于“计划与安排”的子话题有:1.计划;2.安排。
关于“计划与安排”的相关话题主要从以下角度进行考查:
1.谈论梦想的职业、学习计划、人生规划、奋斗目标或理想等;表达某种愿望或期待(2020岳阳、2020淄博、2020黔南州、2020哈尔滨、2020海南、2019贵阳、2019吉林);
2.制定对学习、班级活动、学校活动、团队活动的计划(2020呼和浩特、2019重庆A卷、2019北京);
3.假期、节日、生日聚会等活动的具体计划及安排;(2020宿迁、2019北部湾经济区);
4.志愿者招聘或志愿者服务活动(2020益阳、2020自贡、2019台州、2019嘉兴)。
素材积累
一、常用话题词汇和表达
plan(~to do sth.),volunteer(~to do sth.),visit,help,clean,plant,organize,activity,goal,leave school,graduate from,plant trees,do some cleaning,make…beautiful,give away,call on,want to do sth.,hope to do sth.,decide to do sth.,spend time on sth./ (in) doing sth.,have a better future,live happily,wish sb.good luck
[开头句]
1.The summer /winter holiday is coming.
2.Here's my plan for ….
3.My classmates decided/made a decision to help the people in the nursing home.
4.I will start my new life in a new school. Now I'd like to share my plan with you.
[中间句]
1.We plan to take a bus to…
2.I'm going to have a good rest and relax myself.
3.If possible, I'd like to go to … for a visit of ….
4.We are going to meet at … at 7:00 on ….
5.I am looking forward to seeing you ….
6.I haven't made up my mind whether to go skating or not.
7.It'll take about … to get there by bus.
[结尾句]
1.I'm sure that I can do better in the coming school year.
2.Let's make a plan for the coming vacation together.
3.This is my weekend, like it?
4.I'm sure this vacation will be the best one for me. Let me try!
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆计划安排类
With the summer holiday approaching,I have made up my mind to do something to change my life.
The summer vacation is coming.I'm going to spend time with my family/friends…
We should learn to make a plan before we start to do something.
I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I could go to college to get good education.
【仿写】我要坚持练习画画,以便我能就读艺术学院。
I willkeep practicing drawing/paintingso thatI can go to an art college.
I will develop some good habits such as arriving at school early and listening to teachers carefully in class.
【仿写】我将养成按时完成作业的好习惯。
I willdevelop a good habit offinishing my homework on time.
I plan to take more physical exercise to build up my body.
◆志愿者服务类
We'll make meaningful posters to help people know our city better.
I often visit Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up.
I'll give money to charities to help people in trouble.
My classmate decides to work in the old people's home.
All in all,we can benefit a lot by taking part in the voluntary work.
【仿写】我经常参加保护动物的活动。
I oftentake part in the activities ofprotecting animals.
It's a good chance for us to develop not only a sense of responsibility but also our work ability.
◆梦想类
Hold onto your dream and never give up.
I believe that I will have a bright future ahead of me.
I have a dream that I can be a teacher in ten years.
I dream of being a scientist in the future.
【仿写】我梦想能够有一天飞上月球。
Idream offlying to the moon one day.
I have a strong desire to become a volunteer.
In order to achieve my dream of becoming a writer,I need to do more reading as well as writing.
As long as we work hard,we will achieve our dreams.
典例剖析
亲爱的同学,初中的学习生活即将结束,接下来你将有两个月的轻松假期。有的同学计划去旅游;有的安排走亲访友;有的想要上网(surf the Internet)、看电视、听音乐;有的在娱乐休息之余打算读些书、学点生活技能、参加一些实践活动;还有的……那么你想好做什么了吗?请根据下列提示,用英文写出你的假期计划。词数:80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
提示:
1.What are you going to do?
2.How are you going to plan your activities? Why?
3.What do you expect your coming holiday will be like?
The summer vacation is coming. I'm going to ...
【审题指导】这是一篇介绍假期计划的作文,写作时应用一般将来时(如will/be going to),以第一人称的口吻进行叙述。可采用三段式写作:第一段交代暑假准备做什么;第二段具体介绍假期活动安排;第三段表达对假期的期待。注意第二段是重难点写作部分,叙述时,注意运用恰当的逻辑词或关联词, 将活动安排合理地串联起来。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与高级句型】
◎失分点
“假期计划”类是学生比较熟悉的话题。结合此篇作文来说,易失分的地方主要有:
1.介绍具体的假期计划时,不能拓展思维,不知写什么;
2.有的同学想法很多,但是不知如何布局,缺乏条理性;
3.句式表达简短、单一,一提起将来时,只知道运用be going to和will结构。建议学生平时养成运用长句(如增加时间状语、运用复合句)表达英语的习惯。这样有助于提升作文档次,增加作文分数。
◎高级句型(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1.I want to climb the Great Wall.I want to get some exercise.(用“by+doing”的结构将两句合并为一句)
2.I am looking forward to meeting foreigners.I want to practice speaking English with them.(用because将两句合并为一句)
【佳作欣赏】
The summer vacation is coming. I'm going toBeijing to visit some places of interest for vacation.
I plan to stay there for a week. On the first day, I'll visit the Great Wall to be “a true man”.And I also want to get some exercise by climbing it. On the second day, I'm going to visit the Tian'anmen Square. I am looking forward to meeting foreigners because I want to practice speaking English with them. In the following four days, I'll spend two days learning to play the guitar in the Children's Palace and another two days staying at the hotel for a good rest. On the last day, I'll take a train home.
I hope I can have a happy and relaxing vacation.
【名师点评】整篇文章内容完整,层次分明。第一段开门见山,点明主题:“我”打算去北京游览名胜;第二段具体介绍了活动安排;第三段表达了对假期的期待。值得一提的是,第二段在布局上,按照时间顺序将活动安排合理地组织在了一起。而且,第二段中运用的短语(如get some exercise,look forward to, practice doing等)和句式结构(如to do作目的状语,by+doing, because从句等),短句与长句的交替使用,不仅体现了作者深厚的语言功底,而且使得文章不平庸,富有可读性。
实战演练
某网站正在举行以“My Dream”为主题的英语作文大赛,请你写一篇英语短文参赛。
内容包括:
1.你的梦想是什么?
2.为什么会有这样的梦想?(至少1个理由)
3.你有什么优点或爱好?(至少1点)
4.为了实现梦想,你觉得自己目前需要做什么?(至少1点)
要求:
1.短文应包括所有内容要点,要点表达不分先后,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
2.短文中不得出现自己的姓名和学校名;
3.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Dream
I think everyone should have a dream.A dream can push you ahead.
My dream is to become a tour guide when I grow up.Why do I want to be a guide? First of all,I like traveling very much.Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice.If I become a guide,I can travel all around the world to know more about different cultures.Second,I like making friends.If I work as a guide,I can make lots of friends all over the world.It may be great.
I know it's not easy to be a good guide.So from now on I'll work hard at school to learn as much as possible and learn how to think for others.
There is a saying that “Where there is a will,there is a way.” I am sure my dream will come true one day if I work hard.
思路点拨
1.体裁:说明文
2.人称:以第一人称为主
3.时态:以一般现在时为主
4.段落布局:四段式写作,开头和结尾已给出,学生需写作第二段和第三段内容;第二段需包含提示内容第1~3点;第三段描述为实现梦想所作的努力(提示内容第4点)。