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话题解读
《英语课程标准》中关于“安全与救护”的子话题有:1.安全守则;2.意外;3.急救;4.自我保护。
关于“安全与救护”的相关话题主要从以下角度进行考查:
1.如何远离危险、保证校园安全,如火灾、地震、踩踏事件等的自我保护和自救(2020黔东南州、2019衡阳、2019邵阳、2019南充);
2.如遇校园欺凌事件时怎样正确处理(2019抚顺);
3.制作关于安全教育的主题海报(2019北京)。
词汇积累
一、常用话题词汇
1.安全守则:can/can't,should/shouldn't,must/mustn't,need,have to,had better,be expected to do,be supposed to do,be allowed to do,follow the traffic rules,stop at a red light/go at a green light/wait at a yellow light…
2.意外事故:have a car accident,fall off the bike,be bitten by a snake,hurt one's knees/feet,get burnt,cut one's finger,during the earthquake…
3.急救措施:call for medical help,find out what's wrong,keep calm,make sb.warm,keep sb.comfortable,take sb.to hospital,get an Xray,put one's head back…
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
Safety comes first.安全第一。
◆安全与救护类
There is no doubt that keeping safe is very important for us.
We should always try our best to make sure we are safe and stay away from danger.
We are supposed to be careful when making friends online.
【仿写】过马路时我们应该遵守交通规则。
Weare supposed to followthe traffic ruleswhile crossingthe road.
Selfprotection is one of the most important skills,especially for us teenagers.
When facing an accident,the first and the most important rule is to stay calm.
Thanks to the doctor and the passengers,the man was saved in time.
He could have trouble hearing you or speaking to you.
【仿写】我从自行车上摔了下来,很难动弹。
Ifell offmy bike andhad troublemoving.
If all these are kept in mind,you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.
Remember that danger is never as far away as you think.Take care of yourself at all times!
典例剖析
“盲目救人,害人害己”,这是我们对2020年上半年以来集中发生的几起儿童落水事故的深刻反省。为了帮助学生度过一个安全、有意义的假期,你们班开展了一次以“如何正确救助他人”为主题的安全教育活动。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍溺水事故是怎样发生的,谈谈你的感受并提出安全施救的建议。
写作要点:
1.How did the drowning accident happen?(Give an example)
2.Your feelings about the drowning accident.
3.Your advice on how to save others in a right way.
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Since several drowning accidents happened in the early 2020, the common topic “students' safety education” caught people's attention again.
【审题指导】“儿童落水”是社会焦点,与学生们的生活密切相关。一般来说,学生有话可讲,整体难度不大。结合此题,我们可以分两步走:第一步,描述三幅图片的主要内容,揭示溺水事故是如何发生的(提示的第1个问题);第二步,说明自己的感受,并给出合理建议,如拨打电话119或120,向附近的大人求救等,最后呼吁大家:切勿盲目施救,否则害人害己(提示的第2和第3个问题)。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与高级句型】
◎失分点
这是一篇看图作文,由学生“落水事故”引发的安全教育问题。话题贴合学生生活,写作难度不大。一般来说,有两个方面需要特别注意:
1.图片的正确解读。对于“看图作文”,学生首先要做的就是对图片正确诠释,即如实描述,不能脱离图片随意编造;
2.图片背后的反思。图片解读是表层,如果没有内涵,那整篇文章就会显得空洞。作文的亮点恰恰就是“背后的反思”,即透过图片传递正确的人生价值观。
◎高级句型(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中)
1.A boy went to swim. He didn't pay attention to the warning sign “No swimming!” near the river.(用“without”将两句合并为一句)
2.Do not save by yourself.You must make sure you're safe.(用“unless”将两句合并为一句)
【佳作欣赏】
Since several drowning accidents happened in the early 2020,the common topic “students' safety education” caught people's attention again.How did the drowning accident happen? Let's look at the above three pictures.
In Picture 1,a boy went to swim without paying attention to the warning sign “No swimming!” near the river.However,the river was deep and he began to shout for help.In Picture 2,another two boys heard his help and decided to pull him out of the river by themselves.In Picture 3,the two boys both fell into the river and were shouting for help.
From the pictures,I felt a bit sad.We should help others in a right way,such as calling 119 or 120,asking the adults nearby for help.Do not save by yourself unless you make sure you're safe.
【名师点评】本文结构一目了然,层次非常清晰。第一段通过已知信息直接抛出问题:溺水事故是如何发生的;第二段分别就三幅图描述其主要信息,根据“In Picture 1,…In Picture 2,…In Picture 3,…”的顺序阐述溺水事故发生的经过;第三段表明自己的感受并传递正确的施救措施,从而深化故事内涵,达到灵魂共鸣的目的。
实战演练
近年来,使用手机引发的事故越来越多。某英文报纸开辟了“Mobilerelated Accidents”专栏,征集案例,警示大众。请你根据下面几幅图用英语写一篇记叙文,叙述Liu Mei和Li Dong在放学路上发生的事情。
注意:
1.短文应涵盖前三幅图片中的主要信息,并对第四幅图片中可能发生的情况作出合理推断和简要评述;
2.文中不得出现真实的个人信息;
3.词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:sidewalk人行道;headphones耳机;bump into/hit撞上;honk the horn鸣喇叭;honk喇叭声
One day,Liu Mei and Li Dong were on the way home.They were going along the sidewalk.Liu Mei was playing on the mobile phone while Li Dong was listening to music with headphones.
Unluckily,without looking around carefully,Liu Mei bumped into a big tree.And her friend Li Dong kept on walking.Just then,behind him,there was a car honking the horn to Li Dong.But he didn't hear the honk,either.Finally,the driver had to get out of the car and taught the boy a good lesson.The boy felt so embarrassed that he made a promise that he would never do that again.
Safety is the most important thing.We should try our best to keep ourselves away from danger.
思路点拨
1.体裁:记叙文
2.人称:以第三人称为主
3.时态:以一般过去时为主
4.段落布局:三段式写作:第一段描述图片1的内容;第二段将图片2~4内容串联成篇(对图片4的内容作合理推断);第三段强调安全的重要性。